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Caitlin (Grade 10 / Unknown School) Posted February 16 2007

Editor’s note: These two poems were submitted by Caitlin, a sophomore at Liberty High.

From the top, I only see tiny dots. The distance from the ground up is greatly reflected from my gaze.

Once the ride slows down and reaches the bottom I can see people with cotton candy, balloons, popcorn; children — stuffed toys held in their grips, walking, laughing, looking attentively at everything with excitement; true glee.

They’re just wasting time.

I try to hold back my doubt, my numbness.

Soon the ground and the crowds disperse from my vision. The gravitational pull of the machine lifts me high into the sky.

I don’t care how many times I pay the tolled fee… I’m going to reach the stars tonight. I’m going to wait ’til the sun rises up above that far away hill announcing the dawn of a brand new day.

This ferris wheel is my only escape right now.

That same image of your smiling face is forever lingering in my mind. All I want is to not feel so completely alone.

And now that your presence is not near, now that my arms are not wrapped ’round your porcelain shoulders, all I have is me.

Not with you. Not you there to help me make it through. On my own.


A blue sky nestles above the earth.

Pale clouds popularize our atmosphere.

Far ahead, I imagine a happy setting.

Soil softens underneath my ratty, old converse.

Trees correspond with one another.

Wind wrestles rooftops.

Hair cascades in front of my face.

K. lingers for a bit.

I tumble down the hill.

Dandelions devour the green grass.

We admire the view of the field.

I long to be emancipated from your sinister blue irises.

You were the subject of my refined smock.

“Reinstate my dependency upon you!” I shout.

If only I had done this… I should have… I could’ve… I needn’t have cause…

Thoughts swirling in manifested vat of limitless plights.

Strangling my voice, constricting my vocal cords.

I will avenge him.

Let his beautiful lady paint a mess of betrayal, cheeseparing, truth.

Permit catastrophes to bruise her very soul.

My rhapsody is to deny propensity.

One Response to “Poems”

  1. Caitlin Pedracine Says:

    I long to be emancipated from your sinister blue irises.

    You were the subject of my refined smock.

    “Reinstate my dependency upon you!” I shout.

    If only I had done this… I should have… I could’ve… I needn’t have cause…

    Thoughts swirling in manifested vat of limitless plights.

    Strangling my voice, constricting my vocal cords.

    I will avenge him.

    Let his beautiful lady paint a mess of betrayal, cheeseparing, truth.

    Permit catastrophes to bruise her very soul.

    My rhapsody is to deny propensity.

    This poem is completely separate from the one above it.

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